Jessica Mayes
ENG201.005
Dr. Micer
February 13, 2009
Rhetorical Analysis
In Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.’s “Letter from Birmingham Jail,” he uses many persuasive techniques to convey his point across. This letter was written while Dr. King was confined in Birmingham Jail, and is directed at his fellow clergyman to explain and justify his actions to them. In this letter, Dr. King portrays himself as an educated and well organized person seeking change. This is demonstrated when he states that he is the leader of the Southern Christian Leadership Conference. He explains to them the main reason why he was in Birmingham, stating, “I, along with several members of my staff, am here because I was invited here.” Dr. King was looking to change the nations view and treatment of African Americans, as shown when he says, “…I am in Birmingham because injustice is here.”
Throughout the letter, Dr. King makes numerous allusions to the Bible. At one point, he likens himself to the Apostle Paul, who carried the word of the Bible beyond his home town just as Martin Luther King Jr. did. He goes on to define what direct action, which is what his whole campaign was centered around, is and why it is important. He states, “Nonviolent direct action seeks to create a crisis…” which implies that though he uses nonviolent methods to attain his goals, he still seeks to cause trouble with his actions. This is an example of logos because it tells is a definition, and earlier tells us a story which is widely accepted as truth. However, he does rely somewhat heavily on logical fallacies in his text. He states that if his philosophy had not come about, the streets of the south would “be flowing with blood.” By using fear, he further sways people to accept his methods and actions.
Martin Luther King Jr. demonstrates his credibility quite fully in his letter. He describes in detail, each step of his campaign. In many instances, he describes situations in which he directly has spoken with others concerning his campaign, and the results that occurred. He also displays a strong willingness to negotiate, further portraying himself as a very reasonable and fair man. This is an example of ethos because it is widely agreed upon that being able to sacrifice and negotiate are signs of a person with reason and understanding.
Dr. King’s letter is very emotionally charged. He describes in such detail the “pent-up resentments and latent frustrations” of the African American people. He also uses language here to put fear in the people regarding what would happen if the African American race were to rebel or revolt. He also makes his audience pity him, referring numerous times to the “shattered dreams” of him and his people. By expressing his disappointment in the white race and, specifically, the white church, he tries to make them feel guilty for their actions. By so vividly describing the struggle of his race in America and by causing is to feel sympathy for them and guilt for our actions, he uses pathos, in my opinion, more effectively than any other tool.
Dr. King’s work, though it contains some fallacies, was meant to explain his purpose. He uses logic, fear, pity, guilt, fact, and his own credentials to create a writing that is so persuasive and well written that it is studied even today for his effective use of strategies in persuasive writing. It is a great piece of rhetoric, and demonstrates all of the components of rhetorical quite thoroughly.
Friday, April 24, 2009
Evansville Content Analysis
Jessica Mayes
Dr. Micer
English 201 Section 5
25 March 2009
The Changing Face of Evansville
Every city has a distinct identity that makes it unique from every other city in the world. A city’s identity is defined by a number of things, including its people, different ethnic and cultural groups, history, industry, moral concepts, and the areas and ideas that the people and the city itself value. Location also plays an important role in a city’s identity. For example, the heavily populated and busy city of Miami is obviously very different from a small rural town in Nebraska. The city of Evansville is located in southern Indiana, and is the third largest city in the state (Advameg, Inc). It is the seat of Vanderburgh County, one of the smallest counties in the country. However, being a large city in the Midwest is very different from being a large city on the east or west coast. Without the aid of the ocean and landscapes of the coastal regions, it is more difficult to entice people to move into the Midwest. Evansville is a city with a declining population struggling to turn itself around and once again become a bustling center of commerce using techniques such as creating more jobs by bringing in more businesses, integrating more commercial industries to draw in tourists, and changing from its original German Catholic background into a more culturally diverse city.
The population of the city of Evansville, Indiana had decreased 3.7% between 1990 and 2000 (Advameg, Inc). This is the most recent data, since the next census will not occur until 2010. Though the city is declining now, it was once a new city with increasing opportunity and growing population and industry. It was officially named a city in 1847 with 4000 people. By 1890, more than 50,000 people lived in Evansville. This growth was due to the construction of the Wabash and Erie Canal, which caused the population to increase and business to develop in the area. A large immigration of European craftsmen came to work in the city’s factories and businesses, further increasing the city. Evansville’s location on the Ohio River also made it a very profitable and easily accessible trade center (Advameg, Inc). In the recent years, however, Evansville has become a city with a decreasing population struggling to keep people here and bring more people in. A main cause of decreasing population is migration out of Evansville by the young adult population due to the fact that people in Evansville earn less money than most of the United States (Reynolds). In the past several years, Evansville’s economy has slowed considerably. The unemployment rate as of January 2009 was 9.2 percent (Shaw). However, Evansville is doing its part to attract people to move to the city and entice residents to stay. In order to keep people in the area, Evansville has tried to bring in more jobs. An Evansville committee known as the Growth Alliance for Greater Evansville entered into an innovative technology transfer agreement that created great potential for business opportunity and opened up more jobs for Evansville residents (“United States: Tech Transfer”). Evansville has also implemented incentive programs such as the Evansville Regional Economic Development Corporation, which works in conjunction with the city’s Chamber of Commerce to help develop Evansville’s economy. Job training programs also offer people the opportunity to become more equipped for jobs within the city. Large employers like Toyota, Whirlpool, and Deaconess and St. Mary’s Hospitals provide thousands of jobs to residents of the city (“Evansville Economy”). Though Evansville’s economy has taken a down turn, it is very clearly trying to provide people with job opportunities in as many ways as possible.
Another way in which to attract people to a city is through tourism. The city of Evansville has a few major attractions. These include the historic warship, the LST 325, Casino Aztar, Roberts Stadium, and Mesker Park Zoo. These have been in the city for quite some time. So how do they use these tourist attractions to draw more people in? The city does this by adding to existing attractions to make them more modern and interesting. In 2004 Evansville decided to consider building a new public arena in hopes that it would keep the younger population from leaving. The estimated cost was around ninety two million dollars. While this may indeed keep people in the city, the cost was just too staggering, and construction plans fell through (“Cities and Stadiums”). More successfully, however, was Mesker Park Zoo’s recent endeavor. In 2008 it opened its new attraction, “Amazonia,” an Amazon rainforest exhibit whose main attraction is a jaguar. It has received praises from the residents of Evansville and has hopefully paved the way for more successful projects like it. The main venue for musicians, comedians, and other public speakers including present and former Presidents of the United States is Roberts Stadium. Each year it houses popular musical acts and speakers that draw in very good crowds, furthering the city’s tourism efforts (Langhorne). This promotes the idea that Evansville is a city that seems to care about the image it portrays to the rest of the world and uses that to try to steady its population to prevent further decline.
In a final effort to keep people in Evansville, the city has implemented programs to improve the weak road system. The city’s main thoroughfare is the Lloyd Expressway. Road crews have been working for the past few years on expanding it. Warning lights have also been implemented throughout the city on Fulton Avenue to warn drivers of traffic blockages on nearby roads (Reynolds). In 2006, the Indiana Department of Transportation awarded the Evansville area one and a half million dollars to improve the crumbling road system (“Indiana Department”). The people of Evansville often see the constant road construction as a nuisance and a hazard. At times, it is somewhat hazardous to drive during heavy construction, but the end goal of the city is clear: to improve the quality of the roads to make them safer and more comfortable in the long run. This is a clear effort on Evansville’s part to improve the life and safety of its residents to encourage people to stay here.
Evansville began as a primarily German Catholic community. It has now grown into a center rich in cultural and religious diversity. Evansville has helped to facilitate this diversity by adopting many religious structures, welcoming all people into the city. The city houses a mosque, which is the Muslim place of worship. This allows people of the Islam faith in the Evansville area to have a place in which to gather for worship, as well as acting as a center for celebration and communication within the Muslim faith community in the city (Hussain). Evansville also caters to the Buddhist faith. The Mindful Heart Buddha Sangha is the religious center for people who practice Buddhism. This allows a place for people of this faith to gather together to discuss the teachings of their religion, and gives them a communal place in which to practice meditation, which is a very important aspect of the Buddhist faith (Orr).
Besides being religiously diverse, Evansville is also ethnically and culturally diverse. In 2008 the city opened its first African American Museum that includes exhibits regarding African American life in Evansville throughout its history (Lesnick). This shows Evansville’s clear position of supporting minority groups and allowing them equal opportunity and recognition throughout the city’s nearly 200 year history. Women have also received equal opportunity and recognition in Evansville. A Network of Evansville Women (ANEW) is an organization for professional women. It connects women who are already well established in business and advises those who want to become professionals how to achieve their goals (Medley). This is a great way Evansville has created for businesswomen to communicate with each other, advance to new heights, and gain equal footing with men in the male dominated corporate world.
To summarize, Evansville is a city with a long and economically winding history. It began as a thriving center of business and trade when it officially became a city in 1847. Through the past several years, however, the population has begun to decline due to a large number of young adults migrating out of the city to pursue better job opportunities. Evansville is a tenacious city, though, and is currently doing its best to prevent further population loss. It is doing this primarily by bringing more businesses into the area, therefore creating more jobs for people, and offering training for specialized jobs to increase opportunity. The city is also working to increase its number of tourists. It is doing so through improving old attractions like the new exhibit at the zoo, and allowing celebrities to appear at the local venue, Roberts Stadium. By working to improve the roads in Evansville, the city hopes to keep more people in the area. This better road system will hopefully improve the comfort and safety of the residents of Evansville and the people who pass through. By incorporating many religious views in the city, it creates an environment that welcomes a diverse group of people. Evansville also cares very much about the success of its minority groups, as displayed by the African American Museum and ANEW, an organization to help businesswomen succeed. Though Evansville is declining in population, it is growing in its efforts to reverse the damage that the decrease has done. Evansville is a persistent city that will do most everything in its power to become the bustling center of commerce and diversity that it once was.
Works Cited
"Cities and Stadiums the Issue: Corpus Christi has Similarities to Evansville. Our View: Quality of Life, Affordability are Key Issues." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2008. HighBeam Research. 8 Mar. 2009.
City-data.com. 2008. Advameg, Inc. 1 March 2009. < http://www.city-data.com/city/Evansville-Indiana.html>.
"Evansville: Economy." Cities of the United States. Thomson Gale. 2006. HighBeam Research. 6 Mar. 2009.
Hussain, Mohammad. "Mosque is Becoming as Muhammad First Inteded." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2007. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009.
"Indiana Department of Transportation Awards $1.5 Million to Fund Improvements in Evansville Area." US Fed News Service, Including US State News. 2006. HighBeam Research. 8 Mar. 2009.
Langhorne, Thomas B. "Obama Set for Stadium Rally Tonight Evansville Stop Also Will Feature Michelle Obama, John Mellencamp." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2008. HighBeam Research. 6 Mar. 2009.
Lesnick, Gavin . "Museum Nearly Ready African-American History." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2007. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009.
Medley, Bill. "Working to Connect Evansville Women." Evansville Courier & Press. Evansville Courier & Press. 2006. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009.
Orr, Susan. "Local Practitioners Find Buddhist Method Brings Proufound Peace and Change to Life." Evansville Courier & Press. Evansville Courier & Press. 2006. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009.
Reynolds, Ryan . "A Growing Dilemma Evansville’s Lagging Economy Makes it Hard to Attract Young Professionals Series: Why Some cities grow and some don't First of a five-day series." Evansville Courier & Press. Evansville Courier & Press. 2003. HighBeam Research. 12 Mar. 2009.
Reynolds, Ryan. “Train Warning Lights Activated on Fulton.” Evansville Courier and Press. 27 February 2009. 6 March 2009 < http://www.courierpress.com/news/2009/feb/27/no-headline---27a0xtrainlights-brf/>.
Shaw, Dan. “Vanderburgh County Unemployment Rate at 8 Percent.” Evansville Business Journal. (6 March 2009). 10 March 2009.
"United States: Tech Transfer Deal to be Announced in Evansville." TendersInfo. 2008. HighBeam Research. 8 Mar. 2009.
Dr. Micer
English 201 Section 5
25 March 2009
The Changing Face of Evansville
Every city has a distinct identity that makes it unique from every other city in the world. A city’s identity is defined by a number of things, including its people, different ethnic and cultural groups, history, industry, moral concepts, and the areas and ideas that the people and the city itself value. Location also plays an important role in a city’s identity. For example, the heavily populated and busy city of Miami is obviously very different from a small rural town in Nebraska. The city of Evansville is located in southern Indiana, and is the third largest city in the state (Advameg, Inc). It is the seat of Vanderburgh County, one of the smallest counties in the country. However, being a large city in the Midwest is very different from being a large city on the east or west coast. Without the aid of the ocean and landscapes of the coastal regions, it is more difficult to entice people to move into the Midwest. Evansville is a city with a declining population struggling to turn itself around and once again become a bustling center of commerce using techniques such as creating more jobs by bringing in more businesses, integrating more commercial industries to draw in tourists, and changing from its original German Catholic background into a more culturally diverse city.
The population of the city of Evansville, Indiana had decreased 3.7% between 1990 and 2000 (Advameg, Inc). This is the most recent data, since the next census will not occur until 2010. Though the city is declining now, it was once a new city with increasing opportunity and growing population and industry. It was officially named a city in 1847 with 4000 people. By 1890, more than 50,000 people lived in Evansville. This growth was due to the construction of the Wabash and Erie Canal, which caused the population to increase and business to develop in the area. A large immigration of European craftsmen came to work in the city’s factories and businesses, further increasing the city. Evansville’s location on the Ohio River also made it a very profitable and easily accessible trade center (Advameg, Inc). In the recent years, however, Evansville has become a city with a decreasing population struggling to keep people here and bring more people in. A main cause of decreasing population is migration out of Evansville by the young adult population due to the fact that people in Evansville earn less money than most of the United States (Reynolds). In the past several years, Evansville’s economy has slowed considerably. The unemployment rate as of January 2009 was 9.2 percent (Shaw). However, Evansville is doing its part to attract people to move to the city and entice residents to stay. In order to keep people in the area, Evansville has tried to bring in more jobs. An Evansville committee known as the Growth Alliance for Greater Evansville entered into an innovative technology transfer agreement that created great potential for business opportunity and opened up more jobs for Evansville residents (“United States: Tech Transfer”). Evansville has also implemented incentive programs such as the Evansville Regional Economic Development Corporation, which works in conjunction with the city’s Chamber of Commerce to help develop Evansville’s economy. Job training programs also offer people the opportunity to become more equipped for jobs within the city. Large employers like Toyota, Whirlpool, and Deaconess and St. Mary’s Hospitals provide thousands of jobs to residents of the city (“Evansville Economy”). Though Evansville’s economy has taken a down turn, it is very clearly trying to provide people with job opportunities in as many ways as possible.
Another way in which to attract people to a city is through tourism. The city of Evansville has a few major attractions. These include the historic warship, the LST 325, Casino Aztar, Roberts Stadium, and Mesker Park Zoo. These have been in the city for quite some time. So how do they use these tourist attractions to draw more people in? The city does this by adding to existing attractions to make them more modern and interesting. In 2004 Evansville decided to consider building a new public arena in hopes that it would keep the younger population from leaving. The estimated cost was around ninety two million dollars. While this may indeed keep people in the city, the cost was just too staggering, and construction plans fell through (“Cities and Stadiums”). More successfully, however, was Mesker Park Zoo’s recent endeavor. In 2008 it opened its new attraction, “Amazonia,” an Amazon rainforest exhibit whose main attraction is a jaguar. It has received praises from the residents of Evansville and has hopefully paved the way for more successful projects like it. The main venue for musicians, comedians, and other public speakers including present and former Presidents of the United States is Roberts Stadium. Each year it houses popular musical acts and speakers that draw in very good crowds, furthering the city’s tourism efforts (Langhorne). This promotes the idea that Evansville is a city that seems to care about the image it portrays to the rest of the world and uses that to try to steady its population to prevent further decline.
In a final effort to keep people in Evansville, the city has implemented programs to improve the weak road system. The city’s main thoroughfare is the Lloyd Expressway. Road crews have been working for the past few years on expanding it. Warning lights have also been implemented throughout the city on Fulton Avenue to warn drivers of traffic blockages on nearby roads (Reynolds). In 2006, the Indiana Department of Transportation awarded the Evansville area one and a half million dollars to improve the crumbling road system (“Indiana Department”). The people of Evansville often see the constant road construction as a nuisance and a hazard. At times, it is somewhat hazardous to drive during heavy construction, but the end goal of the city is clear: to improve the quality of the roads to make them safer and more comfortable in the long run. This is a clear effort on Evansville’s part to improve the life and safety of its residents to encourage people to stay here.
Evansville began as a primarily German Catholic community. It has now grown into a center rich in cultural and religious diversity. Evansville has helped to facilitate this diversity by adopting many religious structures, welcoming all people into the city. The city houses a mosque, which is the Muslim place of worship. This allows people of the Islam faith in the Evansville area to have a place in which to gather for worship, as well as acting as a center for celebration and communication within the Muslim faith community in the city (Hussain). Evansville also caters to the Buddhist faith. The Mindful Heart Buddha Sangha is the religious center for people who practice Buddhism. This allows a place for people of this faith to gather together to discuss the teachings of their religion, and gives them a communal place in which to practice meditation, which is a very important aspect of the Buddhist faith (Orr).
Besides being religiously diverse, Evansville is also ethnically and culturally diverse. In 2008 the city opened its first African American Museum that includes exhibits regarding African American life in Evansville throughout its history (Lesnick). This shows Evansville’s clear position of supporting minority groups and allowing them equal opportunity and recognition throughout the city’s nearly 200 year history. Women have also received equal opportunity and recognition in Evansville. A Network of Evansville Women (ANEW) is an organization for professional women. It connects women who are already well established in business and advises those who want to become professionals how to achieve their goals (Medley). This is a great way Evansville has created for businesswomen to communicate with each other, advance to new heights, and gain equal footing with men in the male dominated corporate world.
To summarize, Evansville is a city with a long and economically winding history. It began as a thriving center of business and trade when it officially became a city in 1847. Through the past several years, however, the population has begun to decline due to a large number of young adults migrating out of the city to pursue better job opportunities. Evansville is a tenacious city, though, and is currently doing its best to prevent further population loss. It is doing this primarily by bringing more businesses into the area, therefore creating more jobs for people, and offering training for specialized jobs to increase opportunity. The city is also working to increase its number of tourists. It is doing so through improving old attractions like the new exhibit at the zoo, and allowing celebrities to appear at the local venue, Roberts Stadium. By working to improve the roads in Evansville, the city hopes to keep more people in the area. This better road system will hopefully improve the comfort and safety of the residents of Evansville and the people who pass through. By incorporating many religious views in the city, it creates an environment that welcomes a diverse group of people. Evansville also cares very much about the success of its minority groups, as displayed by the African American Museum and ANEW, an organization to help businesswomen succeed. Though Evansville is declining in population, it is growing in its efforts to reverse the damage that the decrease has done. Evansville is a persistent city that will do most everything in its power to become the bustling center of commerce and diversity that it once was.
Works Cited
"Cities and Stadiums the Issue: Corpus Christi has Similarities to Evansville. Our View: Quality of Life, Affordability are Key Issues." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2008. HighBeam Research. 8 Mar. 2009
City-data.com. 2008. Advameg, Inc. 1 March 2009. < http://www.city-data.com/city/Evansville-Indiana.html>.
"Evansville: Economy." Cities of the United States. Thomson Gale. 2006. HighBeam Research. 6 Mar. 2009
Hussain, Mohammad. "Mosque is Becoming as Muhammad First Inteded." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2007. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009
"Indiana Department of Transportation Awards $1.5 Million to Fund Improvements in Evansville Area." US Fed News Service, Including US State News. 2006. HighBeam Research. 8 Mar. 2009
Langhorne, Thomas B. "Obama Set for Stadium Rally Tonight Evansville Stop Also Will Feature Michelle Obama, John Mellencamp." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2008. HighBeam Research. 6 Mar. 2009
Lesnick, Gavin . "Museum Nearly Ready African-American History." Evansville Courier & Press (2007-Current). Evansville Courier & Press. 2007. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009
Medley, Bill. "Working to Connect Evansville Women." Evansville Courier & Press. Evansville Courier & Press. 2006. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009
Orr, Susan. "Local Practitioners Find Buddhist Method Brings Proufound Peace and Change to Life." Evansville Courier & Press. Evansville Courier & Press. 2006. HighBeam Research. 10 Mar. 2009
Reynolds, Ryan . "A Growing Dilemma Evansville’s Lagging Economy Makes it Hard to Attract Young Professionals Series: Why Some cities grow and some don't First of a five-day series." Evansville Courier & Press. Evansville Courier & Press. 2003. HighBeam Research. 12 Mar. 2009
Reynolds, Ryan. “Train Warning Lights Activated on Fulton.” Evansville Courier and Press. 27 February 2009. 6 March 2009 < http://www.courierpress.com/news/2009/feb/27/no-headline---27a0xtrainlights-brf/>.
Shaw, Dan. “Vanderburgh County Unemployment Rate at 8 Percent.” Evansville Business Journal. (6 March 2009). 10 March 2009.
"United States: Tech Transfer Deal to be Announced in Evansville." TendersInfo. 2008. HighBeam Research. 8 Mar. 2009
Public Sphere Proposal
Jessica Mayes
Dr. Micer
English 201
1 April 2009
Public Sphere Project Proposal
For my public sphere project, I want to alert people to the cruel treatment of animals in fur farms and medical testing. I own thirteen chinchillas, and value them very much. They are very good and loving pets, and I have developed a deep connection with them. I found out about chinchilla fur coats a few years ago from my father, and I was appalled. Since then, I have researched it extensively and hope to find a way to abolish the fur industry completely. Through my research I have discovered that animals raised on fur farms are kept in extremely small living quarters like cages (Diamantis 35). They often mangle themselves and practice strange behaviors like pacing, indicative of stress (de Fraga 19). If an animal is not raised on a farm, it is often trapped in the wild. However, this is not always an instant death. Often times a trapped animal will try to gnaw off the captured limb, spending its last few moments in excruciating pain (Parker 32). When the time of execution comes, the animals may be gassed, electrocuted, or even skinned alive. None of these constitute an instant or painless death (Parker 32). For black bear fur, mother bears are often shot up to ten times, leaving their orphan cubs behind (Donahue 1). Animals are even killed while being used for medical and cosmetics testing. Cosmetics testing is often harmful to animals, and cosmetics are clearly not vital to human survival (Leepson 303). So why do we kill innocent animals so we can look pretty? I even found evidence that other effective sources exist to test cosmetics and medical treatments on (“Animal Testing” 1). One main piece of evidence I plan to use to dissuade people from wearing fur is to present the horrifying facts. For instance, many fur-trimmed coats have been made using dog and cat fur (Triggs 116; “Coats Made” 1). Imagine how many people would want to wear a coat made of their cute little puppy or kitten. Many sources say that killing or using animals for humanities purposes is unethical, and I agree. A fur coat is nothing more than a fashion statement, and it serves no real purpose except to show status. Killing animals for humanities vanity is wrong and selfish (“Animal Rights: Fur” 1). If it helps my point, I will even have religion on my side. Most religions like Buddhism and Jainism practice not harming any living creature (“Animal Rights” 1). This issue is very important to me, and I never want to hear about an innocent animal dying so that a celebrity can show off to the media. Though I am not an extremist, I may agree with some of their methods to convey my point. If it is necessary, I will show people the beautiful life that they are taking from an animal when they wear its fur. I plan to describe the bond that can be made with these animals, and how they are sentient beings that make wonderful companions. I will make flyers that describe some of these animals and their qualities to show their worth. I will also make pamphlets with facts and statistics describing the cruelty that these animals occur before they are brutally killed. Posters may also be used, with pictures of the fur clothing and the animals they are made from side by side, to illustrate the life that is lost when a fur garment is made. I hope to dissuade people from ever wanting to see an animal killed for it's fur, and for fashion purposes. As I like to say, the only thing that looks good in a chinchilla fur coat is a chinchilla!
Dr. Micer
English 201
1 April 2009
Public Sphere Project Proposal
For my public sphere project, I want to alert people to the cruel treatment of animals in fur farms and medical testing. I own thirteen chinchillas, and value them very much. They are very good and loving pets, and I have developed a deep connection with them. I found out about chinchilla fur coats a few years ago from my father, and I was appalled. Since then, I have researched it extensively and hope to find a way to abolish the fur industry completely. Through my research I have discovered that animals raised on fur farms are kept in extremely small living quarters like cages (Diamantis 35). They often mangle themselves and practice strange behaviors like pacing, indicative of stress (de Fraga 19). If an animal is not raised on a farm, it is often trapped in the wild. However, this is not always an instant death. Often times a trapped animal will try to gnaw off the captured limb, spending its last few moments in excruciating pain (Parker 32). When the time of execution comes, the animals may be gassed, electrocuted, or even skinned alive. None of these constitute an instant or painless death (Parker 32). For black bear fur, mother bears are often shot up to ten times, leaving their orphan cubs behind (Donahue 1). Animals are even killed while being used for medical and cosmetics testing. Cosmetics testing is often harmful to animals, and cosmetics are clearly not vital to human survival (Leepson 303). So why do we kill innocent animals so we can look pretty? I even found evidence that other effective sources exist to test cosmetics and medical treatments on (“Animal Testing” 1). One main piece of evidence I plan to use to dissuade people from wearing fur is to present the horrifying facts. For instance, many fur-trimmed coats have been made using dog and cat fur (Triggs 116; “Coats Made” 1). Imagine how many people would want to wear a coat made of their cute little puppy or kitten. Many sources say that killing or using animals for humanities purposes is unethical, and I agree. A fur coat is nothing more than a fashion statement, and it serves no real purpose except to show status. Killing animals for humanities vanity is wrong and selfish (“Animal Rights: Fur” 1). If it helps my point, I will even have religion on my side. Most religions like Buddhism and Jainism practice not harming any living creature (“Animal Rights” 1). This issue is very important to me, and I never want to hear about an innocent animal dying so that a celebrity can show off to the media. Though I am not an extremist, I may agree with some of their methods to convey my point. If it is necessary, I will show people the beautiful life that they are taking from an animal when they wear its fur. I plan to describe the bond that can be made with these animals, and how they are sentient beings that make wonderful companions. I will make flyers that describe some of these animals and their qualities to show their worth. I will also make pamphlets with facts and statistics describing the cruelty that these animals occur before they are brutally killed. Posters may also be used, with pictures of the fur clothing and the animals they are made from side by side, to illustrate the life that is lost when a fur garment is made. I hope to dissuade people from ever wanting to see an animal killed for it's fur, and for fashion purposes. As I like to say, the only thing that looks good in a chinchilla fur coat is a chinchilla!
Friday, April 3, 2009
Public Sphere Week Project
For my public sphere activity, my main focus will be alerting people to animal cruelty, particularly in the fur industry and the medical research field. I own thirteen chinchillas, and they will be the main animal that I focus my project on. I plan to alert people to the harsh living conditions and the cruel treatment and execution of these animals on fur farms, and also the suffering that many animals experience when they are infected with diseases to be tested on. I will make a flyer, which will have my main focus and a brief summary of what I plan to convey, to gain people’s attention. I also want to make a pamphlet with facts about the animals that are killed and worn as fur, especially chinchillas and what great companions they make. I need to focus on the community, and I hope to change the way they perceive both wild and domestic animals. I’m a little stuck on other public literacy I could use. Any help would be appreciated! Thank you!
Thursday, February 26, 2009
Content Analysis Research
One of the main issues I have encountered in my research of the Evansville Courier and Press is the economy. The economic decline our country is experiencing right now is clearly affecting our community. We are hopeful that the county will receive more money as the year progresses. Many stories have been published about local people losing jobs due to this recession. It also seems that the community is experiencing a decline in the job market as well.
Crime also seems to be a recurring theme in our community. The main crimes seem to be rape and shootings. This is disconcerting, as it seems to be enough of an issue that i have seen several times just in the past month.
School issues have also been popular recently. Issues dealing with tips for doing well in school, new schools opening, and school budgets allow me to infer that school is very important in our community. Our community seems to realize that the future lies in the hands of young people, and their education will enable them to better our community. With that in mind, the community seems to try to do it's best to further and improve education for young people.
Crime also seems to be a recurring theme in our community. The main crimes seem to be rape and shootings. This is disconcerting, as it seems to be enough of an issue that i have seen several times just in the past month.
School issues have also been popular recently. Issues dealing with tips for doing well in school, new schools opening, and school budgets allow me to infer that school is very important in our community. Our community seems to realize that the future lies in the hands of young people, and their education will enable them to better our community. With that in mind, the community seems to try to do it's best to further and improve education for young people.
Sunday, February 22, 2009
Initial Findings of Content Analysis
According to www.census.gov, the population of Evansville in July of 2006 was estimated to be 350,356 people. According to factfinder.census.gov, around 49,200 people are white males, and 55,655 are females. 13,275 of the total population were African-American. About 6,000 were males and about 7,000 were females. About 1,400 people in Evansville were found to be Hispanic of Latino. According to infoplease.com, the main manufactured products of Evansville are Machinery, plastics, primary metals, pharmaceuticals, food products, and fabricated-metal items. It is also home the the University of Southern Indiana and the University of Evansville. It was founded in 1819 and is located in Vanderburgh County. 62,393 people over the age of 16 are in the labor force, while 4,103 are unemployed. That's all my demographic information for now. More to come!
Tuesday, February 17, 2009
Memo
The topic I chose was the 30-hour famine because it is honestly the only service project I can think of that I have ever done. I didn't even realize when I started writing that I this event changed me very much as a person. Hopefully after reading my essay you will understand the importance of helping others, and how it can better you as a person as well. My main idea is that by helping others, you can help yourself to grow as a person. I think that was communicated fairly well in my draft. I hope you enjoy it.
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